Post by yello on Jan 22, 2009 16:31:55 GMT -5
yo guys,look at my story.
It's called:The adventures of ronin
INTRO:
Meet ronin,a guy who doesn't play by the rules.he's a bounty hunter,always getting money.He's the best killer around.People hire him to kill victims.There was old jimmy joe.He got killed by...ronin.
Enough about that,lets get to the real story...
ronin:Yo ben,any heads to blow up today?
ben:Well..um lets look at the files
ben pulls out his HUGE file.He flips through the pages
ben:Ah!There's jonny'o,A member of a gang.
ronin:That's cool
ben:There is a problem though.He's leavin for a plane in 5 minutes.
*ben points to a nearby clock*
ronin:DANG IT!I'll run for it.
*ronin runs in traffic*
dummy:watch where you are going,punk!
ronin:shut up!No one calls me a punk!
*the dummy gets shot with a pistol*(wouldn't want to be him...)
*after 2 minutes of running,ronin makes it.He then pulls out a sniper rifle*
ronin:show your head!
*LOL,it's shown in sniper style*
ronin:aha,caught ya
*jonny'o gets shot! bam!blood is on the ground*
ronin:ha ha!Sucker!
*ronin RUNS back to bens office,there's a surprise waiting*
ronin:Ben,are you here?
*ben is lying on the table in a pool of blood,he's dead*
ronin:Hell no! who did this?
*a letter is on the table,strange*
ronin:A letter huh?
It reads:Dear ronin:I killed ben as you see.meet me by 35th street.
At the location
*ronin makes it to 35th street.It is raining very heavily*
ronin:I'm here.Out of all times,it had to be in rain
*ronin walks in,the wall has letters in spraypaint saying:welcome ronin*
ronin:that's just messed up
*finally,he walks into a dark small room,It has a table.On that table is another letter.*
ronin:another letter?
this letter reads:Can you find me?
ronin:just great...
*the lights turn out all of a sudden*
ronin:WHAT THE?!
TO BE CONTINUED
cool huh?
This is only part one.If you like it,I'll write part 2.
It's called:The adventures of ronin
INTRO:
Meet ronin,a guy who doesn't play by the rules.he's a bounty hunter,always getting money.He's the best killer around.People hire him to kill victims.There was old jimmy joe.He got killed by...ronin.
Enough about that,lets get to the real story...
ronin:Yo ben,any heads to blow up today?
ben:Well..um lets look at the files
ben pulls out his HUGE file.He flips through the pages
ben:Ah!There's jonny'o,A member of a gang.
ronin:That's cool
ben:There is a problem though.He's leavin for a plane in 5 minutes.
*ben points to a nearby clock*
ronin:DANG IT!I'll run for it.
*ronin runs in traffic*
dummy:watch where you are going,punk!
ronin:shut up!No one calls me a punk!
*the dummy gets shot with a pistol*(wouldn't want to be him...)
*after 2 minutes of running,ronin makes it.He then pulls out a sniper rifle*
ronin:show your head!
*LOL,it's shown in sniper style*
ronin:aha,caught ya
*jonny'o gets shot! bam!blood is on the ground*
ronin:ha ha!Sucker!
*ronin RUNS back to bens office,there's a surprise waiting*
ronin:Ben,are you here?
*ben is lying on the table in a pool of blood,he's dead*
ronin:Hell no! who did this?
*a letter is on the table,strange*
ronin:A letter huh?
It reads:Dear ronin:I killed ben as you see.meet me by 35th street.
At the location
*ronin makes it to 35th street.It is raining very heavily*
ronin:I'm here.Out of all times,it had to be in rain
*ronin walks in,the wall has letters in spraypaint saying:welcome ronin*
ronin:that's just messed up
*finally,he walks into a dark small room,It has a table.On that table is another letter.*
ronin:another letter?
this letter reads:Can you find me?
ronin:just great...
*the lights turn out all of a sudden*
ronin:WHAT THE?!
TO BE CONTINUED
cool huh?
This is only part one.If you like it,I'll write part 2.